Settle Down!

After a binge of running around, I’m finally settling down.

Less than a week after returning home after cavorting through Iowa (as related in my previous two posts), I embarked on another adventure. This one, closer to home: The Ohioana Book Festival.

I first heard about this event from my sister, Holly, who recently retired from thirty years with the the Cleveland Health Sciences Library.  But I guess she became familiar with Ohioana when she was a member of the Church and Synagogue Library Association rather than through the Health Sciences Library. (Is that right, Holly?) At any rate, she told me about the book festival, I applied, and was invited to attend as an author this year. I asked her if she’d like to go along to keep me company, and she agreed.

It was fun. Since she lives about an hour and a half away, she drove to our house on Friday evening so we’d be ready to leave bright and early the next morning. The directions I had said it would take two hours to get there, so we left at 7:15 am, hoping to arrive in plenty of time for the opening at 9:45, even allowing for delays.

Ha! I should have gotten directions from the event website rather than Mapquest. The directions I had would probably have been accurate under ordinary circumstances, but they didn’t take into account the massive road work. I was supposed to take I-70 W to I-71 N, then get off on I-670; but that exit ramp was closed. I went back to I-70 to see if I could find an alternate route, but no luck.

We stopped twice for directions and bought a Columbus map. Using a combination of these resources, we finally arrived at our destination at 10:20. I don’t think I missed anything important, and despite the rocky start, it turned out to be a good day.

After the book fair ended, we went to a reception at the Governor’s Residence gardens. Despite the name “residence,” no one actually lives there. But it’s a nice place to visit. Got to meet some more of the other authors and in some cases their spouses, and also toured the house and gardens. Then we headed home and arrived in good time with no incidents, tired but satisfied.

Holly & me at the Governor's Residence

The next morning Holly visited my church with me, went to lunch with the family, and then headed for home. It was a very enjoyable weekend (for me, at least — I think she had a good time as well). I think that’s the only time we’ve ever spent a weekend together like that. Maybe we can do it again sometime!

Before I go, I’d like to share a few things from the Book Festival. Besides meeting some interesting authors and others, I got to visit with my oldest daughter, Emily, who lives in Columbus. Also, friends Chuck & Joy Holt.

Joy had purchased The Story in the Stars online from Amazon and brought her copy with her for me to sign. But when I opened it to the title page, I was surprised to find my signature, along with the words (in my handwriting), “Praying for you, dear reader.”

Huh? It took me a few moments to figure it out, but here’s what seems to have happened: A few months ago I saw a request (passed along by someone in a Yahoo group I’m in) for donations of books. A woman was collecting books in order to start a library at a woman’s shelter in her town. I donated two copies, and that “Praying for you” inscription was what I’d written in each one.

It’s possible that one of the ladies in the women’s shelter stole the book and sold it on Amazon. But it’s also likely that the whole request-for-donations thing was a scam to begin with. I’ll probably never know for sure.

Another point of interest: one of the other authors at the festival was Mike Olszewski, an old friend of my brother’s from Bedford High School.

Third: The festival was well attended. One of the browsers I saw wandering around was a young guy in a green T-shirt sporting the words “Honk If You Love Jesus.” When he passed by, I said, “Based on what your T-shirt says, you might like my book.” He looked at it and said, “I might…”

I asked. “Do you like sci-fi?” He shrugged. “Yeah… I do…” So I explained that it’s a sci-fi story from a Christian point of view.

His face took on an odd expression. “Well, I wouldn’t say I’m a Christian.”

At that point, my expression was probably a little odd too. I said, “Really? Because your shirt seems to suggest that you are.” His reply: “Well, I love Jesus, but that doesn’t mean I’m a Christian.”

I tried to follow that logic. “That’s a bit of a mind-bender for me,” I started to say, but he abruptly turned and walked away.

Well. Okay. That was interesting.

Sunday afternoon, I finished with the last round of edits on Words in the Wind, Book #2 in my Gateway to Gannah series. Haven’t seen any cover art yet nor heard a release date, but stay tuned. I expect the book will be out this summer, and then you’ll wish I’d stop talking about it. Personally, I like the 2nd book better than the first. I hope you’ll let me know your opinions once you  have the opportunity to read it.

 

 

 

 

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Honey, I’m Home!

Due to severe storms in Chicago late Sunday, all flights in and out of that city were either canceled or delayed. I was scheduled to fly from Des Moines to Akron via Chicago – but the first leg was canceled.

Because so many others were similarly inconvenienced – and because the airlines have been cutting down on the number of flights to avoid the waste of planes flying half empty – they had difficulty finding seats for all the passengers. They wanted me to wait until Tuesday evening.

Tuesday?! That’s two extra days! I’d already imposed upon my friends’ hospitality for too long; I didn’t want to prolong it any further. So I booked a flight leaving early Monday morning for Pittsburgh instead of Akron, rightly assuming that hubby would rather drive the extra distance to pick me up than wait another day and a half.

For some reason this flight went via Newark, where I picked up another for my final destination. Yes, I had to backtrack, but that’s the way they do things sometimes. The second flight was delayed about 45 minutes, but no worries; I landed in Pittsburgh about 3:30 pm and soon found hubby’s smiling face at the baggage area (along with the rest of him). Woo hoo!

What I did not find at the baggage area was my baggage. Turns out it opted for an extended stay in Newark. (Only a suitcase could understand why that’s a place to be desired!) I was finally reunited with it this morning (Wednesday), and now all’s well in the world.

Well, not really. But I’m feeling a bit more settled now.

ARGH!

Unfortunately, things still aren’t quite back to normal, and won’t be until I get to an Apple Store. On Tuesday morning, when I turned on my computer the first time after arriving home, I discovered I’d somehow managed to break my laptop screen. The computer was in my possession the whole trip, so I can’t blame the airline for that one.

And speaking of blaming the airline: I do wish people would be more considerate of the unfortunate souls who have to deal with complaints. While I was there, another woman whose luggage was lost (from a different flight) made quite a scene.

I fully understand her frustration, but there’s no need to take it out on the person behind the desk, who was doing her best to help her. But when the employee’s answer wasn’t what the customer wanted to hear, the woman yelled, “Don’t you tell me no!” and, stabbing the air with her finger, added, “And don’t shake that finger at me!” when the employee made an unconscious, non-threatening gesture. The controversy went on for quite some time, involving the manager, and unsettling the rest of us who were unwilling spectators. The only one raising her voice or being rude was the angry customer.

She and I left the baggage claim area at the same time. She growled about how she was going to make a report about that woman’s (and “woman” isn’t the word she used) extreme rudeness and how she was going to make life miserable for her. I’m not usually one to butt in, but I’d heard about all I could without commenting. I said, “I thought she was very pleasant and polite, under the circumstances.” Then heard myself adding, “Which is more than I can say for you.”

Well, of course she took exception to that, but at least she continued on her way instead of pausing to physically assault me. She just said, “Don’t pass judgment on me, lady. You haven’t had the last 24 hours that I have.”

True, I hadn’t had the last 24 hours that she had; from what I heard as she vocalized her complaints, her whole experience was far worse than mine. But I’d just been making a claim for lost baggage, so she should have known everything hadn’t been going smoothly for me. How did she know I hadn’t had a worse 24 hours than she’d just had? Because I wasn’t ranting, like she was? As to her objection to my passing judgment, well… I won’t comment on that.

Before my book signing in Pella, Iowa

Despite the bump in the road at the end, though, I had a wonderful time in Iowa. Friends Susan and Glenda and their dear husbands extended their warm hospitality and made me feel very welcome. Susan and her hubby even acted as if they didn’t mind when I interrupted their plans with additional runs to the airport, one of which was at 5:30 am. I sold (or used as promotional give-aways) every book I brought with me. The writer’s retreat was as delightful as last year’s; and I have many happy memories from the trip.

But I’m glad to be home! Next stop: The Ohioana Book Festival in Columbus this Saturday (May 12). If you’re in the area, stop by and see me!

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Blogging on Vacation

Not doing very well at this, am I?

Even though I haven’t been writing about it, I’m having a wonderful time with wonderful friends. I took some photos in lovely Pella, Iowa yesterday afternoon but neglected to download them to my computer OR to bring the camera with me today, where I’m working in a coffee shop (as my current host has no wireless internet for me to use). So I’ve stolen some shots from the Tulip Time website to brighten your day.

This year, some cheerful residents are referring to this year’s event as the Stem Fest. Thanks to an unusually warm spring, the tulips bloomed early and so are past their prime. It’s unfortunate, but the show will go on as scheduled, with tulips or without.

My dear friend Glenda (who’s growing dearer by the moment!) arranged for a radio interview this morning on the local Christian station, KCWN, to talk about The Story in the Stars.

Not sure why, but I wasn’t particularly nervous about it, going into it. And any little twinges I may have been suppressing were completely gone when she prayed with us (Glenda and me) before going on the air! Didn’t expect that, but it was a perfect way to put the whole thing in proper perspective.

After that, the interview was absolutely painless – especially considering the radio announcer did all the talking. She’d just read the book last night and was bubbling over with excitement about it. I did manage to get an occasional word in every now and then, but for the most part, she provided, free of charge, the best advertising money could buy: enthusiastic reader testimonial.

Glenda also arranged a book signing for me at Branches, a bookstore here in Pella, perfectly timed to commence at the conclusion of the afternoon Tulip Days Parade. The bookstore is located behind the parade grandstand, right in the thick of things. Add the timing and proximity to the publicity from this morning’s radio program (not to mention some advertising Glenda submitted to the local papers), and I’m seriously concerned about running out of books to sell tomorrow.

However, the store has agreed to order more for their customers if I sell out.  The customers will have to wait for them to come in, then come back to the store to get them. But since store owners generally like return visits by customers, they might be glad if I have more demand for my books than my supply can handle.

Don’t want to shortchange my other dear friend who’s hosted me, Susan Lawrence. She and her husband Gary picked me up on their way home from vacation and tolerated my presence at their home for a few enjoyable days before Glenda took me off their hands. The Lawrence and Mathes families are fabulous ambassadors for Iowa. Based on my recent experiences, I have to agree with the Kevin Costner character in the movie “Field of Dreams.” It’s not quite heaven here, but close.

Lots more I could babble about, but I’ll spare you for now. Just one more thing: if you like pastries with a wonderful almond flavor, you must come to Iowa to try a Dutch letter!

 

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Update

I’ve never been good at multitasking, and the older I get, the more easily I’m confused. So when I get busy, I can’t think about blogging.

I know you’ve been dying to know what I’ve been up to, so here’s the latest:

Book signing yesterday at my local Christian bookstore. Was pleased that when I sent the newspaper a media release announcing the event, they actually printed it!! More or less–they cut it to ribbons, but they printed all the most important stuff. Nevertheless, the event was neither well attended nor profitable. I didn’t expect much, so I wasn’t disappointed. If I’d seriously wanted a crowd, I would have changed my name to Michelle Obama.

Okay, not seriously. But I had an enjoyable afternoon chatting with the other author present, who as it happens goes to the same church I do, and we have some mutual friends. We just never met before.

Words in the Wind. On Friday, I returned the first round of edits for Book #2 in my Gateway to Gannah series. I was concerned the chronology might be confusing at one point, and the editor agreed this was possibly a problem. So I reorganized some scenes. It was a bit of work, but I think it reads better now. We’ll see what the editor says when she goes through it again.

I had another concern about the end. Personally, I rather liked it, but my critique buddies were divided on the issue. One hated it with a holy passion, another’s response was I love it! I love it! I love it!, and a couple others said they saw what the first person objected to but it didn’t bother them so much. So I was curious to see what the editor would have to say about it. She offered a suggestion that was easy to implement, and I think everyone will be satisfied with the result. I’m getting excited to see this baby in print, and am eager (and a little worried) to see the cover art.

Incidentally, while reviewing the manuscript I realized I really like the book. Better than The Story in the Stars. I think readers will agree.

Family matters continue to make me smile. Our son recently got engaged and they’re planning an October wedding. Our daughter is still awaiting the arrival of the children they’re adopting (see my blog post about that, if you haven’t already). There’s a possibility these two events might happen at roughly the same time. This could make things interesting, but we’re not alarmed. Just taking things one step at a time. However, to avoid the extra drama and expense, I’ve decided to forgo the ACFW conference in September.

And on the subject of the adoptees, when I blogged about it, I neglected to include a link you might be interested in. The family has established a fund to which people can contribute to the cause, should they feel so moved. If you’d like to help, click here.

Travel plans. Some of my writer friends are getting together for a retreat the first weekend in May. We did this last year, too, and had a wonderful time. One of said friends, Susan, is currently vacationing with her husband. They plan to stop here on Tuesday this week, visit a bit, then on Thursday, take me with them when they head for home. After we arrive in Iowa, they’ll deliver me to Glenda, who will have to put up with me for a week, poor thing. Among other things, a book signing in Pella is on the itinerary. Then we’ll retreat on May 4 – 6, after which I’ll fly the friendly skies homeward.

So now you know not only what I’ve been doing, but what I’m planning to do in the near future. I’m sure you feel ever so much better now that this mystery is solved. The next puzzle is: will I blog during my travels? Or will I neglect my duties again?

We’ll find out together!

 

 

 

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The One-Star Review

I’ve seen/heard so much about the dreaded one-star reviews my fellow-authors receive, after I published my first book last year, I almost felt disappointed that I hadn’t gotten a one-star of my own.

This kind of feedback usually reveals more about the reviewer than the book in question. I don’t know about you, but when I start reading a book I dislike—whether it’s poorly written, dull as unseasoned egg white, or outright offensive for some reason—I cut my losses, put the book down, and start another. I read fiction for pleasure (as well as professional research); why torture myself reading something I don’t enjoy? Merely so I can blow off steam composing a scathing review? I don’t get the point.

I’ve said all along that the consistently positive reader feedback I’ve received so far in no way indicates that everyone loves The Story in the Stars. All it means is that the people who dislike it have been too polite to say anything.

Until now. Yesterday, I discovered a one-star review posted on Goodreads by a reader calling herself International Cat Lady.

You might think it would upset me, but it doesn’t. I’m serious about that. I’ve disliked a number of books that others raved about; it’s only reasonable to expect that others won’t like what I love. And I’m aware there are many who won’t agree with the basic premise of the story. So, my curiosity aroused, I read the comments to see if the views expressed were merely personal, or if she addressed real errors that should be corrected.

Here’s the review in its entirety:

Such a disappointment! This book popped up on my Goodreads suggestion bar as a recommended Goodreads author, and all of its reviews were 5 stars. I love good sci-fi, so I thought I’d give it a shot. Boy was I disappointed. For starters, it was Christian fiction. I am not a Christian (I am not religious at all), although I do respect people of all religions. I try to avoid all religious fiction (not fiction in which characters are religious, but fiction with an intent to proselytize) because I do not wish to be preached to. Not only was this book Christian fiction, but it worked the Christianity (and not an allegory like, say, the Chronicles of Narnia, but straight-up Jesus Christ on the Cross Christianity) into the outer-space-and-aliens story so subtly it was like being run over by a truck. When it got to the part about how Darwin was wrong, I nearly threw my Kindle across the room.

But it wasn’t just the overwhelming Christianity. There were typos and grammar errors, and the Kindle formatting was awful. The plot barely made any sense, and the resolution certainly didn’t. I won’t write any spoilers for those of you who will disregard my review and read the book anyway, but let’s just say the plot did not hold up. (And no, it would not have held up had Anderson substituted a fully fictional religion for Christianity.)

The religious objection doesn’t offend me. In fact, I very much appreciate the fact that she specified the problem was its “straight-up Jesus Christ on the Cross Christianity” rather than just religion in general. It shows she’s aware of the subtle but significant difference between external religion and the supernaturally transforming faith of biblical Christianity. If she’s offended by the idea of Jesus as Christ, that’s her problem, not mine. (And for her, it’s the very biggest of problems! I pray she resolves it before she takes her last breath.)

However, typos, grammar errors, and “awful” Kindle formatting do concern me. It’s rare to find a print book with no errors, and I’m aware of a few in Stars that slipped through the editing and proofreading screens. Typos, that is. I’m not aware of any grammar errors. I seriously don’t think either is a glaring problem with this book, and those that exist certainly aren’t serious enough to knock four stars off an otherwise good review.

I can’t speak for the Kindle formatting, since I have no Kindle and have never had the opportunity to see what the ebook version looks like. No one else has mentioned these formatting problems, but if you’ve found some, I hope you’ll let me know what and where they are so they can be corrected.

The plot issues she cites are the greatest cause for concern. An incomprehensible plot would, in fact, make a book deserving of a bad review. But her complaint gave no specifics. Is something missing? Does a character lack believable motivation? What scenario doesn’t hold water? She doesn’t say; she merely states the plot barely made sense, especially the resolution.

If she’d pointed to something in particular, I’d definitely take a look at it to see if it can be fixed. If I’d received similar comments from others, I’d be making a serious analysis of my story line. However, when everyone else who’s read and commented says the story engrossed them – when readers accost me to complain about lost sleep because they couldn’t put the book down – and when one tells me she read it twice, once quickly because she had to find out what was going to happen next and then again more slowly so she could thoroughly enjoy it – I have to conclude that the comprehension problem is with the reader rather than plot construction.

The story is about laying aside deep-seated hatred and distrust in order to understand others. It’s about how the grace of God through faith in Jesus Christ (straight up Jesus Christ on the cross, down from the cross, and up from the grave – accept no substitutes!) can free us from misconceptions.  It illustrates this through the interaction of the two main characters, and the resolution occurs when they both come to understand it.

Could it be that the reviewer can’t follow the plot because she’s too blinded by her own prejudices to get the picture?

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Starving Artists And How Not to Be One

Not all writers are blessed, as I am, with a partner who provides such complete support. I have the luxury of writing without having to worry about paying the bills because my husband not only encourages my writing, but subsidizes it.

I have great respect for the many who are compelled to write but must also hold down a full-time job in order to feed themselves and their dependents.  I’m the sort who needs her sleep and can’t think clearly without a sufficient amount, so I don’t know how anyone can write coherently in the morning’s wee hours or at the end of a long, stressful day.

Because I’ve never been in the position of having to support myself with my writing — nor have I been in the writing business very long — I have no tried and proven wisdom for those struggling artists. However, I recently ran across an excellent post on the subject by author Lawrence Block. Clearly, he knows what he’s talking about, and the article needs no further introduction: Getting By on a Writer’s Income.

If you’re a struggling writer — or are in any position where your income is variable and uncertain — read, learn, and be encouraged!

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Full and Running Over

You’ve probably seen the prayer of the mother of young children: Lord, grant me the patience to endure my blessings.

As amazing as parental blessings are, grandparental joys are deeper, richer and wider. But sometimes, just as tiring. On Monday, Craig and I concluded a week’s visit in Virginia with our 2nd daughter and her family, feeling full and running over. And ready to go home.

The purpose of the visit was threefold: 1) for Grandpa to build the stairway on the playhouse he built last summer but had to suspend work for awhile because of a bad back; 2) to help with a garage sale; and 3) to celebrate a grandson’s fifth birthday.

The garage sale was a little out of the ordinary. It was a fund-raiser for a project they’re working on, and they’d received donations from scads of people. I have no idea how many contributed, but the amount of stuff they were given to sell was huge, filling the two-car garage, driveway, entire front yard, and the basement. (You can walk into their basement through a ground-level patio door at the back of the house, and they filled the area with bins and racks of clothing for sale.) I intended to take pictures of the massive event, but it was so chaotic, I didn’t find the time. It’s probably one of those things you can’t capture in a picture, anyway; it had to be seen to be appreciated.

It was a lot of work. A LOT of work. For the sale itself, they enlisted all four parents as well as a few friends, and it kept us all hopping. But that’s not counting the several weeks’ worth of preparation and the final clean-up. It was worth it, though; they made a tidy sum.

So what’s this project they’re raising funds for, you may ask? Answer: an international adoption. Though they have three natural-born children, they’re adopting two more — from  the Democratic Republic of the Congo. They’ve been going through this expensive process for quite some time and are now in the final leg, hoping to receive the children in a few months.

As I mentioned a couple days ago, this post has been difficult to write. For some reason, I can’t seem to put all my bubbling-over feelings into words.

I’ve never been the kind of person who enjoys being around children. I loved my own, and I love my grandkids; but I don’t enjoy children in general. Therefore it’s been hard for me to wrap my mind around why my daughter and her husband would want to adopt when they have three of their own.

They both love kids (unlike me). It breaks their hearts to think of all the children in the world who have no one to love them. Orphans are tragic in any country, of course; but in some places, like the Congo, those children have less hope for the future than a stray dog has in an American pound. Any thinking, feeling human being would want to help them, but the situation is staggering. What can be done for them?

En masse? Not much. But individually, a few can be helped.

My daughter and son-in-law know they can’t change the world—but they can change the universe for two children.

It’s a tremendous expense; it’s an enormous amount of work; they’ll pay for it over the rest of their lives with an ocean of toil and tears. But they know that, and are doing it anyway.

So when people ask me about my grandchildren, I tell them I have three, with two on the way. And I’m every bit as proud and happy—and looking forward to holding the next two in my arms—as I would be if my daughter were carrying them in her womb.

That doesn’t put all my feelings into words, but it’s a start. Maybe I’ll write a book about it someday.

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We Interrupt the Regularly Scheduled Programming…

Yesterday I struggled to compose a post about our recent trip to Virginia. Not sure why it was so hard, because it was a great trip, and I knew exactly what I wanted to say.

But while I drafted and redrafted and gritted my teeth and started over, my friend Glenda Mathes posted a notice on her blog announcing my next book signing. So while I’m working my own post, I’ll borrow hers. Check this out.

Thanks, Glenda!

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What Does a Character Have to Do to Be a Protagonist Around Here?

Hoping to find representation for my Gannah series, I met with an agent at a writers’ conference a couple years ago.

The agent listened to my spiel about The Story in the Stars. Then, with an expression that made me wonder if her breakfast disagreed with her, informed me women don’t read science fiction; and since my protagonist was female, it wouldn’t appeal to the target market.

My first thought was that this was a ridiculous statement. She didn’t want to represent me for some reason she didn’t feel at liberty to share, and this was the first excuse that came to mind.

But, hey, she’s the professional, and I’m just a nobody. We should listen to people who know more than we, right? So I gave the idea some thought. Should Dr. Pik be the protagonist instead? Hmmm…. It was true, my crit partners and beta-readers seemed to like him better than Dassa. But make him the protagonist?

I asked her if the protagonist should be introduced first. That is, Stars opens with a chapter about Dassa. We don’t meet Pik until chapter 2. So if I were to rework the book to make Pik the protag, should I introduce him first?

The agent considered the question and answered something to the effect that there’s really no rule on that, but it might not be a bad idea.

I thanked her for her time and went to lunch thinking about what she’d said. After further consideration (and polling of a number of women to ask if they liked to read sci-fi), I decided my first thought was correct. That agent simply didn’t want to represent me, but wasn’t comfortable giving the real reason(s). I suppose that’s her prerogative.

Fast-forward to 2011.  The Story in the Stars is now available in print and ebook form — for both male and female readers. Both seem to enjoy it.

In July, my character Dassa was interviewed on Naomi Musch’s blog.

Not to be outdone, Dr. Pik scored an interview with blogger Laurie Jenkins.

I found it interesting that Pik agreed with the aforementioned agent. Not that women don’t read his genre (even fictional characters know better than that), but that he should have been the protagonist.

I figured that was just his vanity speaking. But then, when Elaine Stock offered to host a blog debate between Dassa and Pik on the subject, the doctor made a good argument.

I can’t find any hard-and-fast criteria for determining who your protagonist should be. But here are a few guidelines, widely accepted by writers, editors, and publishers:

  •  The protagonist is the character who drives the story. If you can remove him without undermining the plot, he’s not the protagonist.
  • The protagonist should be interesting enough that the reader will want to hang with him throughout the whole book. He doesn’t need to be likeable, exactly. He just needs to be compelling.
  • By the end of the book, the protagonist should have experienced change and/or growth of some kind.
  • How much does each character have to win or lose by the events unfolding in the story? The one with the most at stake should be the protagonist.

Got it? Good. Now, class, for your assignment:

1. Read the debate and weigh the evidence.  Make your decision as to whose argument carried the day.

2. Leave a comment on Elaine’s blog telling us who you believe should be the protagonist of The Story in the Stars: Dassa or Pik. Elaine will announce the results on her blog next week.

3. If you’d like a free print copy of the book, mention this in the comment on Elaine’s blog. She’ll announce the winner next week.

4. If you don’t win the drawing, buy the book yourself (or ask your local library to order a copy; if you live in Dover, New Philadelphia, Sugarcreek, or Bedford, Ohio, your local library already has it). Read it. Love it. Tingle with anticipation for the release of Book #2 in the Gateway to Gannah series, Words in the Wind, later this year.

5. If you haven’t already done so, subscribe to my blog.

6. Accept my thanks for doing the above!

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Rambling Along a Leprechaun Trail

I suspect leprechauns don’t make trails. They’re supposed to be magical, after all, and well-worn paths seem awfully mundane. Besides that, they’re just wee little things, and big bumbling folk like us probably couldn’t spot their footpaths if they made them.

However, whether it’s a meandering leprechaun road or a series of rabbit trails, I’m wandering on it today.

According to History.com, St. Patrick was born in fifth-century Britain, during the time of Rome’s dominion there. At the age of sixteen, he was kidnapped and brought to Ireland as a slave. He later escaped but returned to Ireland, and is credited with bringing Christianity to that land. It’s believed that he died on March 17, 461. Subsequently, a mythology surrounding his life sprang up and became ingrained in the Irish culture. One of the most well known legends involves his having used the three leaves of the shamrock to explain the Holy Trinity.

The Irish have observed St. Patrick’s Day on May 17 for the past ten centuries or so, but the first St. Patrick’s Day parade was held in the United States, in 1762, when Irish soldiers serving in the British military marched through New York City.

Ever since, the holiday has grown in popularity to where now, people of all backgrounds (not just Irish) celebrate the day. This is particularly true in the US, Canada, and Australia, but, to a lesser degree, in such far-flung locales as Japan, Singapore, and Russia. It’s interesting to note that until the 1970s, Irish law required pubs to close in observance of St. Patrick’s Day, because it was a religious holiday.

All the hype is inexplicable to me. Certainly, there’s reason to celebrate the bringing of the gospel of salvation to the Emerald Isle, but I’ve never gotten the impression that’s what this is about. It just seems to be an excuse to party. I suppose there’s nothing wrong with that, and I don’t mind people having their fun. But as for me, I’m not a party person. I’d rather celebrate the season by digging in the dirt and planting something.

In this part of the world, gardeners like to celebrate St. Patrick’s Day (while their corned beef and cabbage cooks, and between draughts of green beer) by planting the spring garden. This usually includes peas, lettuce, and radishes, none of which mind cold soil.

Most years on March 17, our garden is either under snow, frozen solid, or too muddy to plant. On the rare occasions when we did plant on that date, it seemed to be a waste. Nothing germinated until the soil warmed, and our first plantings matured no sooner than the second.

This March, though, the weather’s more like May. Hard to believe that this time last year, Craig was still ice fishing. As I write, the outdoor thermometer registers 72 degrees (Fahrenheit). The weather man predicts temperatures in the mid-80s later in the week. So, thinking it might be worthwhile for once, we planted the early garden.

And speaking of gardens, what exactly is a shamrock? I’ve heard people use the term for a number of different plants, including the ordinary clover that frequently invades local lawns, and yellow wood sorrel (aka sour grass), a common weed. Wikipedia says the Irish shamrock is actually a three-leaved old white clover (trifolium repens). The name derives from the Irish word seamróg, which is the diminutive version of the Irish word for clover (seamair).

I didn’t research leprechauns.

Nor the origins of the corned-beef-and-cabbage tradition. I’d never eaten corned beef until I was an adult, but I liked it the first time I tried it. I’ve been cooking it for my family with cabbage, carrots, potatoes and onions since early in my marriage. For some reason, I never knew it was associated with St. Patrick’s Day until fairly recently. (That is, something like fifteen years ago. “Recently” is relative, don’t you know.)  I think I read about the background of that tradition a year ago or so, but I don’t remember the details. It sticks in my mind that it’s only in this country that people eat corned beef on St. Paddy’s Day, not in Ireland. But I might be wrong about that.

Corned beef is beef, but it has nothing to do with corn.

But there is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, if you consider the rainbow to represent God’s promise of redemption, and gold, the eternal riches that are ours in Christ.

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